I agree with what TSebasti said about your use of examples, but not with the lack of flow. It's difficult when you are covering specific but different points to "flow" per se. In fact, I think it holds together well, and you cover all the VAPID points very well indeed. Excellent work.
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Date: 2011-10-01 08:14 pm (UTC)