I found it very helpful when you put in several different examples for what you were saying about the piece. This made it more clear as to what you were talking about instead of having to re describe the entire essay. However it didn't feel like your entry flowed very smoothly from paragraph to paragraph. The paragraphs each seemed like they were part of something different
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Date: 2011-09-21 10:49 pm (UTC)However it didn't feel like your entry flowed very smoothly from paragraph to paragraph. The paragraphs each seemed like they were part of something different